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"What Guys Think"



Maybe if I tried a little harder


Or was a little bit smarter


Maybe if I wasn't such a bore


Maybe then she'd like me more


Am I even exciting enough?


Does she like a guy who's tough?


Maybe if my breath didn't smell


She'd like me more I can tell


Does she even like me at all?


Maybe she's more on the ball


Maybe I'm just a fool strung out


Maybe I need less self-doubt


Before she starts to prefer


Another guy next to her


Maybe I'm her only one


Burning brightly as her sun


Maybe I should walk away


And leave her to another's prey


Falling into the hands of a fiend


Maybe I should intervene


Maybe if I applied who I am


And didn't play pretend


And lived inside her world


I would be the best for this girl


If I didn't try things myself


And actually asked for help


Maybe I could get inside her head


And better understand what she says


Maybe if my mind didn't wander


And I didn't sit here and ponder


I could stop asking why


And build the courage to try


Maybe I'll get a chance to say


Would you like to go on a date?


If I try to kiss her goodbye


Maybe then she'll have a good night


Should I eat while she stares?


Will she like what I'll wear?


Maybe if I compliment her hair


She'll let me see her underwear


Maybe if I wasn't a fail


Maybe if I tried to exhale


I could breathe a lot easier


And live a longer life for her


Maybe if time didn't move so fast


Maybe then this love will last


If only time didn't rush us by


If only I wasn't a stupid guy


But maybe within more time


If I could write a better rhyme


Or even a simple melody


I could earn her heart brilliantly


And she can believe in herself


And soar above this world of hell


Maybe if we worked as a team


Maybe then you'll feel what I mean


But maybe now I shouldn't think


Maybe I should have another drink


Worthless answers from useless friends


Things will be all right in the end



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Another poem I wrote. NOTE: Not ALL guys think like this, some do.
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~AngelWingss07 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
I have to admit this truly caught my eye and then I was really captivated by each line after that. Amazing, I have to say this was really, really worth reading and I am glad I did c:
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Mood: Love ~Wolfkid1031 Mar 1, 2013  New member Hobbyist Interface Designer
we are never alone in this world
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Mood: Love ~PrInCeRj Feb 11, 2013  Student Photographer
Alot of those did came in my mind too... ;)
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~Mathmonkey Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish all guys thought like this :/
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~aaammmsterdddam Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A lot of these thoughts are in my head.
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~gettioo Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a cute poem.

--Funny they have this ad here about cheating boyfriends.
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=BleedTheDream180 Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lololol i dont even plan that
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~gettioo Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's unlike many of your other poems. What gives you inspiration?
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=BleedTheDream180 Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i am such a bipolar wqriter. nothing really specific. i write about everything and i dont have to be in a certain mood
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