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"The Girl Next Door"



There's this girl I know who lives next door


Maybe seventeen if not eighteen years old


And everyday I see her pray for change


Staring out her window with nothing new to say


She's perfect some suggest in every way


Beautiful looks, kind heart, excellent grades


But everyday she still prays for change


Because every night is always the same


She sits on her bed and plays guitar


While her parents for hours lecture her


She took a job after school to help pass days


But even that can't alleviate inborn pain


But what she was mad at, I couldn't tell


Often from my window I'd see her yell


Yet this perfect prom queen ruled the scene


Living a life other people dream


With her diamond rings and a smile that gleams


Even the sun bowed down with its light and its beams


And as the years continued on to progress


So too did much of her success


She finished college and took a job at a firm


And acquired wealth through a boss who was stern


But everyday she still prayed for change


Staring out her window with nothing new to say


She found a man and they moved into the city


And was kept active, fluent, and always so busy


They bought a car, a dog, and a lifetime of memories


But none of this was her cure or a remedy


She just could not continue putting on this act


Miserable on the inside as a matter of fact


She could not go on and face another day


Knowing the mundane phases will never change


She drove to the deepest river she could find


With the excuse that she needed to unwind


She walked to the mouth where people swim


With concrete shoes on; she dove right in


And reflecting back on those times


Her deflecting problems was a sign I realized


Because everyday she prayed for change


Because every night was always the same



 


 

:iconbleedthedream180:
Another poem, I wrote. This one actually inspired by a band called Screeching Weasels with a song with the same title [link] (There's the link so no one thinks I stole the ideas).
Blink 182 also covered it :)
I guess I covered it too in my own poetic style and changed a bit of it
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~lucyjewel Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cute i love it!
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=BleedTheDream180 Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
xDD
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Mood: Big Grin ~lucyjewel Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D :p
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~6-9Changeling Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Brilliant! <3
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I love this poem,its so well detailed :3 nice job!
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=BleedTheDream180 Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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~yellowwindow6 Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this one is cool in a glomy way i guess.
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~Fantasy-WarriorX Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:huggle:
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Mood: Love ~OceanDust Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this. Sounds like me sometimes.
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