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"Surgery"



A girl only sixteen on the corner for sale


Would rather sell herself than end up in jail


Kicked out of the only place she could call home


Now she has nowhere to call her own


And as she slips into her chamber's bed


She is forced to believe the lies she is fed


About life and health and random things


She even questions what her life may bring


A punished life left out of her possession


Her problems exist as her primary obsessions


And when they tell her there is a cure for her disease


Of course she will believe them without disbelief


For what else has she left to lose?


A punished life without any decisions to choose


Now she lies there ready for the injection


She is perusing this out of fear of rejection


On second thought she would rather be given the gas


That will put her asleep for as long as it lasts


She closes her eyes and quickly drifts away


She can no longer control herself as her thoughts wander astray


The doctor nods as the first incision is made


I can not believe they are cutting up such a pretty face


Unfortunately this story I am not pretending


But I must leave this poem with a cliffhanger ending


For I can not tell what the future beholds


Please God do not ruin her heart of gold

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:iconlalita17:
I was wondering where this was going, it kept me guessing till the end :) normaly I don't enjoy cliff hangers, but this one suited the tone of the peice. What a sad story...
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=BleedTheDream180 Aug 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
its actually based off of someone i know. one of the very few poems that's actually about someone real.
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:iconlalita17:
ohmygosh! how awful;that's so sad. I'm so sorry to hear that!
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~MoonxZackery Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
you have real talent, Michael (my apoligies if i spelled that wrong)
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=BleedTheDream180 Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you xD and you spelled it the right way lol
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~MoonxZackery Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
You're welcome. Now I shall do a fist pump for my accomplishment x3
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