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"Start The Fire"

Close your eyes
And know I'm with you tonight
Can you feel the fire burn and crackle?
Can you feel my hands grip and grapple?

Keep them closed
As the fire warms our toes
As the fireflies engross
Our two bodies as they glow

Do not open them yet
Do not stop or push reset
Can you feel our bodies start to sweat?
Do you remember when our lips first met?

Look up towards the night
Towards the stars in the sky
The ones that match the bright
Stars in your eyes

Take my hand now
And to you I solemnly vow
To make your night as bright
As those fireflies and their lights

Keep holding my hand
Because I know where you've been
As the ashes burn to embers
Do you promise to remember?

Follow me inside
And let me be your guide
Step for step, stride for stride
Cuddle with me beneath moonlight

Lay with me under
Our tent as it thunders
Outside, but we're protected
Even fireflies aren't affected

Can you feel my heart?
It begs to not be apart
From your hand as you touch my skin
From your life as you let me within

And outside of our tent
The fireflies circumvent
Through the rain they keep their glow
As our fire grows and grows

And in the chilly morning
We can tell the story
Or at least a little clip
Of our covert camping trip
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Another poem I wrote. I've been putting this one off for awhile because its something I rarely do. Its a request poem from :iconchristineway18: to her boyfriend :icongool5000: about camping and romance and stuff.
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~WoodpeckerDMW Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like how you put that, "canping and romance and stuff" kinda like you don't like it. X3
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=BleedTheDream180 Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol and stuff xD
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~SaphirePZ Nov 14, 2012  Student Writer
Very sweet!
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Mood: Love ~Nightshadow150 Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very good! :clap:
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!AIR-IS-LIFE Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
d'awwww.... i like it.

But now I want s'mores. O.o
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=BleedTheDream180 Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol s'mores are awesome
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!AIR-IS-LIFE Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yes. yes they are.

Feeling better?
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=BleedTheDream180 Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yessss
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Mood: Love ~ChristineWay18 Nov 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
yay thank you so much *is so fucking happy* omg omg omg i love it sooo much *freaks out and acts like a 5 yr old, then dies from the awesome poem*
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=BleedTheDream180 Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
take it easy lol
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