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"Seduction"



I woke up in a cold, dry sweat


Tied to a bed that I may regret


I felt the warmth breathe on my neck


It was a feeling I'd never forget


And there she was just standing there


That sinister smile with long brown hair


With cuffs in hand and snakelike charm


My head was soon to sound alarms


Who knew what she was thinking then?


Her smile was of false pretense


I tried to move but out of luck


I was trapped there under satin stuck


Her words were of the utmost kind


The kind that would slowly blow my mind


The soft-spoken whispers in my ear


Made my shiver into pools of tears


And seeing the sparkles in her eyes


I knew it was soon my time to die


She fed me lies that were oh so sly


As her body slowly caressed down mine


Her tongue trailed my skin like a ship setting sail


With waves crashing against a boardwalk's rail


Her skin was pale and as white as snow


Like streetlights as they burn and glow


And every word I tried to grumble


Was muffled by the gag and mumbled


But wanting it to stop I really did not


This scene was becoming rather hot


Seduced into the helpless toy that I am


Reduced into a boy as docile as lambs


I arched my back the lower she was


And tried to lose myself just because


I may never see the sunrise after tonight


I may never get the chance to say goodbye


I slipped inside her warm, moist life


By her choice of course as I was tied


Only for a brief moment as if to tease


She then climbed off of me despite my pleas


I believe she wandered off into the dark


Where I heard the sound of match lights spark


The smell of smoke surged through my head


Faster than the fire she set to our bed


My wrists soon bled from pulling at cuffs


But to no avail suffer I must


This was too surreal to feel the pain


I clenched my eyes shut so it would go away


And when I opened them she was standing there


That sinister smile with long brown hair


She asked me if everything was fine


Her words were of the utmost kind


And so I woke up in a cold, dry sweat


Tied to a bed that I may regret

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:iconskylastar:
Wow. That's pretty much my response. This is a really powerful poem. I love it. :D
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:iconyellowwindow6:
Mood: Joy ~yellowwindow6 Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that's a seduction to ya!
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`lintu47 Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello, you have been featured in my weekly dA love for everyone! article.
Have a nice day :huggle:
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=BleedTheDream180 Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awww thank you thats very nice! have a great day as well
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:iconlintu47:
`lintu47 Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconbugplz::iconyourewelcomebubble:
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!SakuraJBlossom Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This was an intriguing poem! Just as the subject was seduced by the girl I was seduced by the words. Great job!

I do have two suggestions for your lines in terms of fixing typos:

1) "felt the warm breath on my neck" <--- You originally had 'breathe'

2) "Made me shiver into pools of tears" <--- You accidentally had 'made my'
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:iconlalita17:
~lol, this is one of those guilty pleasure poems :XD: A gripping piece of literature for sure:clap:
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:iconeleanortombs:
I love this poem and I do so hope there is more of these written by you.....
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=BleedTheDream180 Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hmm i don't usually write i guess what you would erotic stuff though i have a few more like this, but every now and then i do xD

Thanks for favoriting it
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:iconeleanortombs:
Where are they? Are they here? I shall have a look....Didn't have a chance last night ....
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