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"Reminds Me Of You"

A beautiful sunset
Over a moonlit city
Let us not forget
You are more than pretty

Holding each other
Mistletoe above
We depend on one another
The magic of love

Carnival rides
Below starry night skies
Light up your eyes
The best looking prize

A first-place medal
Watching pandas on ice
To me there are several
Ways you are nice

Healthy sunflowers
A box full of kittens
This is the power
Of love that has smitten

Talking to old friends
Smores over heat
You, my dear, transcend
And no one competes

Warm, soapy hands
Writing haikus
Written in sand
Are the words "I love you"

Frolicking in snow
Cuddles by a fire
I want you to know
It is you I admire

A slick, diamond ring
A secret not told
Rainbows in spring
Your picture is gold

Walking through grass
Barefoot for miles
Porcelain glass
Reflects your cute smile

Trees that are swaying
A pie has been made
Children are playing
My life you have saved

Hot toast and jam
Ice cream and treats
The way that you can
Make me complete

The aroma of candles
A fresh cup of tea
Pictures on mantles
The sounds of the sea

Lost in a dance
A cute puppy barks
The time for romance
And fun in the dark

The fresh scent of books
Hot chocolate in mugs
The way that you look
The feeling of hugs

Brown, autumn leaves
A crisp, wispy breeze
I still can't believe
You took a chance on me

The way that you sing
When the sky's a bright hue
All these sweet things
Remind me of you
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Another poem I wrote. A simple love poem describing a bunch of sweet things that remind me of someone in particular
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~WoodpeckerDMW Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Too cute and fluffy, I think I'm going to vomit... XP
But nice otherwise (:

it's too bad that relationships like these are hard to come by.
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=BleedTheDream180 Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol fluffy, i like that word XD
hey, you never know :)
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~WoodpeckerDMW Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol X3
And yeah, you never do (:
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~musiclegend Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a great poem :-) I love it
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Awwww that is so sweatI love this poem
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~yellowwindow6 Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hows her reaction gose like if / when she read this?
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~SteffenC-itsjustme Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You just took me on a journey..I traveled light and was left with a lot of wonderful impressions along the way. Especially these four verses:
"Hot toast and jam
Ice cream and treats
The way that you can
Make me complete

The aroma of candles
A fresh cup of tea
Pictures on mantles
The sounds of the sea

Lost in a dance
A cute puppy barks
The time for romance
And fun in the dark

The fresh scent of books
Hot chocolate in mugs
The way that you look
The feeling of hugs"

From hot toast and jam, to candles and tea, to a dance and fun in the dark, to the scent of books and hot chocolate..It just felt like I've lived an entire day in the life of a person happily in love. Thank you for writing this, it's absolutely beautiful. <3
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Mood: Confused ~yoursweetlullaby7309 Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
not to be rude but from what i see from your other work this makes me feel like a kindergartener wrote since its just basic rhyming. no offense i feel like im reading a dr. seuss story and even he has better rhymes.
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=BleedTheDream180 Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thats why i left a description and said it was simple
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