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"New York City"



I have wandered into the unknown


On my own with nothing but a backpack


Only to find that I have grown


More confused as to where I'm at


I have been out into the real world


It is indeed quite a scary place


And now I have returned


Encapsulated in my tiny cave


Sidewalks are conveyer belts


Filled with backstabbers and sharks


Looking to pickpocket the unaware


In the early hours of the dark


I have been to clubs and bars


Many times I've had sex


I've slept in broken down cars


Many faces I'd like to forget


I've seen a mother abuse her child


And husbands hit their wives


I've seen girls running wild


Selling themselves to perverted guys


I have been in hospital rooms


Crying in the cold at night


Much liquor I've consumed


Thankfully I avoided fights


I lost my father at the age of ten


But not before I inherited his disease


Everyday I wonder when


God will end it all, maybe, please?


Crowded streets and polluted air


Envelop corners everywhere


Bodies close from hair to hair


Bump each other without care


I have loved and lost and love again


I have lost so many old time friends


People move on and scatter like bats


I hope they are less confused as to where they're at


I've seen countless marriages fail


I hope that doesn't happen to me


With the wind beneath my sail


I try to react positively


I've seen the poor in streets


Stricken with poverty and hunger


I've heard the shouts and beeps


Of traffic jams grow somber


I've seen huge towers collapse


And chaos form full bloom


I've witnessed this city's relapse


Intoxicating me like perfume


I've seen a friend get run over


By a car not once but twice in a row


I've tried wishing on those clovers


But this firefly has lost its glow


I have destroyed myself many times


Only to find myself intertwined


With the relentless madness that goes on


Exchanging handshakes with falling bombs


So every night I light a smoke


And watch the bills pile up


Owning a house is certainly no joke


I'm stuck in a middle class rut


And I'm not expecting any pity


Or a medal from what I've seen


I'm just surviving life in New York City


And turning reality into dreams



 






 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


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~SwiftWindSpirit Aug 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
New York City is a different animal, that's for sure. I like how you referenced the crime of 9/11 and then used it in a way we can all relate to given what is going on now.

You tell poems quite well..
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=BleedTheDream180 Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you. i try to be creative and original but maintain rhyme and storytelling xD
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~GroovyFish Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Probably the most accurate way to describe the center of the universe. I love and hate this town. Well done. :)
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:iconchewyraezen:
BRAVO! what a wonderful piece!
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~notoriouslyMe Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the last two lines. They make for a lovely ending.
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=DragonsChest Aug 24, 2012  Professional Writer
Interesting to read...
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:iconlilredwagon:
VERY WELL said/written!! ....

They 'say' that 'mankind' has 'evolved' ....

NOT sure that THIS OLD geezer would AGREE with that statement .... ~SIGH~

SOME 'see' with their EYES ....

SOME 'see' with their HEARTS ....

SOME 'see' with BOTH ....

May YOU be a "BOTH" .... SMILES ....

My BEST to you and yours, KIND SOUL .... LRW.
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~Stardust900 Aug 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This reminded me of Cell by Stephen King. I guess just the chaos part...
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Mood: Joy *PabloPastulio Aug 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
aww come on guys new york isnt that bad i live in it lololol best of times, worst of times, living and surviving friends! great piece btw :D
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=BleedTheDream180 Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yea i mostly focused on the downside of new york, but new york has a lot to offer for newcomers xD
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