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"Make Someone's Day"



One day I was waiting for the bus


On a hot afternoon observing drivers cuss


At each other in lanes driving so insane


Screaming at each other and pointing the blame


When I boarded the bus and paid for my fare


Everyone was staring as if I wasn't there


I sat in a seat next to a kid who would weep


For his mom screamed at him because he wouldn't sleep


I sat there and stared at these people so bare


And lifeless inside and so unaware


Of the stories they are missing that they could have shared


If they weren't so quiet and had not a care


So I turned to the lady with the son who was loud


And told her that she should be very proud


Of the cute joy she has that made me so glad


To break the silence and share what I had


She told me her story and then I told her


As her kid purred on my arm as if I had fur


You can sleep well and breathe easy tonight


Knowing everything will be all right


Knowing the children are tucked in their beds


Dreaming of spaceships gliding in their heads


You can wake up after feeling sweet and brisk


Ready to take on any challenge or risk


Knowing you will be whisked away by the morning's breeze


Daydreaming the ride as you enter the keys


To the car you parked in your driveway's port


Sort of to the left of the basketball court


You set up for your son so he could have fun


And play outside in the evening until dinner is done


These perfect little lives in this perfect little scene


I won't pretend to understand what it means


Because everybody has their own problems


But your strength grows as you solve them


A stranger's tale can hail wonderful imagery


Sugar-coated or not they make amazing stories


Its what makes us human and not afraid to walk outside


Its what makes us share the stories of our lives


And as our planets rotate through the universe


Someone out there may have been given a curse


But needs to let out the emotions within


But is too scared to look beyond his hollow house of skin


So next time you see a stranger coming around the bend


Why not say something; we are all looking for friends  


For there is nothing too little or minor you can say


A simple hello could make someone's day



 


 

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Beautiful
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Mood: Affection ~genogirl12345 May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i made your day last time!!!! ^u^ cool poem!!
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~DistantRelations May 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Its funny because over the past few months I have been trying to make my life better (as it is only me who is actually making it bad really!) and I read this and think.. wow, this is exactly what I've been thinking.. being kind and sort of appreciating everything that is there, no matter how small or big. (although this may not have been your exact message) hehe

Very wise words, thank you. ♥♥
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=BleedTheDream180 May 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
well however you interpreted it i'm glad you found meaning
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~asassinshate Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is very inspirational.
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~Elektra310 Apr 29, 2012  Student General Artist
thats beautiful.
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~Metal-loving-Rebel Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh well, that is true. I myself just don't trust me to start communicating with other people I don't know well.
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=BleedTheDream180 Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thats totally understandable
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:iconyingodapenguin:
Wow, awesome poem! It has a great message too :D
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=BleedTheDream180 Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks i tried with the message xD
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