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"Come Inside"



I pulled up to a truck stop on the side of the road


Or at least that's what I remember being told


And as the morning unfolded I saw within view


The sunrise climb higher upon this quiet avenue


I could almost feel the regret of sin building within


I knew I should have stopped that before it could begin


But I must inform sadly I had lost control


I gave her my trust and her purity I stole


I was not ready to be the father of a baby boy


In fact I had planned on moving to the state of Illinois


What annoys me now is how life can change within hours


Or seconds with mistakes that devour my power


But she was grazing me with her manicured fingertips


As she bit my tongue and licked her lips


She wanted it more than I had thought so before


She dragged me down onto the hardwood floors


But I really didn't want to give it all to her


Especially since the drinks made that night such a blur


She was still young and vibrant with a whole world to gain


Come to think of it I couldn't even remember her name


That entire night called for a dire need to restrain


Myself but I tainted the walls with a fresh set of paint


Because she told me to come inside and don't be shy


As she winked her eye; she was oh so sly


My face lit up and became suddenly lukewarm


Like the mist in the air during a gentle summer storm


She knew exactly what to do and had all the right moves


That proved she was more than just in a drunken groove


But what were her intentions?; what if I slipped?


What if this scene wasn't written in my script?


Neither of us were considering futures at stake


Our streams were colliding into one giant lake


And so it ended as fast at the break of dawn


Before I knew what happened I had come and gone


Never to be seen again until the nine months that passed


When I received a phone call during one semester of class


It was that girl that I had met nine months ago


She told me she had a mistake she needed to forego


She was infuriated and blamed it all on me


I really didn't need this at a quarter to three


But now here I sit at the truck stop on the side of the road


Remembering that night or the stories that were told


I gripped the little bundle of joy lying next to me in aches


And said, "I love you son for you are not a mistake."



 


 


 

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*VivaFariy Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Speechless, you are amazing!
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:icondd1000:
... Woah... Is this based on something true?
By the way awesome job!
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=BleedTheDream180 May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
na its just a poem
and thank you!
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:icondd1000:
Your welcome. By the way, you must be a very talented writer if you can write that from the top of your head!
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=BleedTheDream180 May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
>.< well ive been writing poems for 5 years about anything and everything its how i cope with life xD
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Mood: Love ~NinjaFoxsBuddy May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aaaw, it's so cute!!!
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=BleedTheDream180 May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
xDD thanks
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~NinjaFoxsBuddy May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem ^-^
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~RoseTheUnicorn May 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Just amazing.
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:iconcindigi:
I really enjoyed reading your poem. I couldn't wait to see the end of story. Very good.
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