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"Coerce"

I don't know who you expect me to be
But there's a constant pressure that hovers over me
I'm sorry if I don't meet your expectations
But realize that I too am frustrated beyond dictation

I realize nothing may be the same again
Or maybe that's only my fear with friends
Growing up I always tried to play pretend
But I know I've only been fooling myself in the end

I know my time is running out
And the path that I'm on won't be the easiest route
But these expectations that you have of me
Is more than anything that I could be

Or is that just me hiding from what's real?
There I go again; trying to conceal
An excuse to avoid overexposing
That light at the end of my tunnel is closing

And you're right; I could be much more
The only thing holding me back are these doors
But they aren't locked; my will is delayed
I'll always pray things stay the same way

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Another poem I wrote because I couldn't sleep. Its just a short thing.

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~6-9Changeling Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I hope you don't mind, but I'd like to use this for a Modern Poetry analysis thingy for English?? :iconunsureplz:
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:iconbleedthedream180:
=BleedTheDream180 Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yea, thats fine, as long as you credit me
just curious, why this one though. i literally wrote it at like 5 am and thought it sucked and didnt even put it in any groups xD
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:icon6-9changeling:
~6-9Changeling Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Credit given!
Well, it displays how my life is now. I wrote 2 poems on it, 'Gift', where my dad has all these expectations I won't or don't want to meet. Yeaa XD
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=BleedTheDream180 Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ohhh, well i'm one who believes everyone is in charge of their own life and shouldn't do something life altering JUST to please another person nor should anyone pressure anyone else.
like if a father is a lawyer and forces his son to be a lawyer, that's just fucked up lol
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~6-9Changeling Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Exactly!! My dad told me if I didn't 'use my gift to the fullest potential to help people' he'd be disappointed in me. Like you really tell your kid that?!?!
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~TiaPrincessNews Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It seems most everyone has felt this way at some point
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~WoodpeckerDMW Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, I know the feeling, but maybe mine is a little bit more.
[link] once I read your poem, it instantly reminded me of one of my own.
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:iconallflowerspetalsfall:
Definitely felt this way for sure, short and to the point nice job
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~Saucelito Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist
It really does sound like some of my own thoughts. Nice job.
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!AIR-IS-LIFE Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i've felt this way before. Slightly. XD for a little bit.

Then it was gone.
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