"Avoid Drama"
How dare you spread such rumors
How dare you say such lies
How can I be pregnant?
I'm not a girl; I'm a guy!
Why would you think that?
Why would you fib
About people you don't know
Or things you never did?
He broke up with her
She cheated on him
Please don't get me involved
I don't know where to begin
So what if you never
Got asked out to the prom?
It only lasts one night
Then life will carry on
Every week there's someone
Fighting with a friend
Who hates who this week?
Please let this drama end
Because I'll never understand
Why people have to judge
Adding insult to injury
To hearts that never budge
What you're probably feeling
Are typical teenage emotions
You'll switch feelings as fast
As the tides switch in oceans
I know that you're miserable
But aren't we all?
Who hasn't at some point
Taken a fall?
Don't say you hate your parents
Because I know you'll love them after
Don't blow it out of proportion
It's just another chapter
I don't need your drugs
I have a paper overdue
What's the point of writing
About some guy I never knew?
If you can't afford that dress
Get a job after school
Stop using him for money
Don't use her as a tool
Problems can be solved
So let's not overthink
Every bad conclusion
Or you'll be on the brink
Of always seeking attention
But you won't get it, you'll see
I'm just trying to live
A life that's drama-free
So do yourselves a favor
Avoid the fakes and liars
And anyone who savors
In causing you some drama
Also, the rhymes are amazing, and the flow of the words are so smooth, it forms a "song" because of the easy beat.
The first stanza was really clever, also.
Probably all of us could relate to this poem. (Oh the wonders of public school) Even the most ridiculous things people say, the sad thing is, sometimes people believe them.
Overall, well done! I wish I could rhyme like you. The impact was really nice. That was astonishing!
I myself try to avoid teenage drama, and to see these words expressed through the exasperated, fed up teenagers point of view makes everything much better, and I hope the people that do cause excessive drama in these chapters of life see this poem.
I also must say, I like your rhyme scheme you included on the poem. It made the poem appealing to read and even more appealing to just look at, and for that I thank you.
Overall, you did an outstanding job with the poem on life.
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