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"Avoid Drama"

How dare you spread such rumors
How dare you say such lies
How can I be pregnant?
I'm not a girl; I'm a guy!

Why would you think that?
Why would you fib
About people you don't know
Or things you never did?

He broke up with her
She cheated on him
Please don't get me involved
I don't know where to begin

So what if you never
Got asked out to the prom?
It only lasts one night
Then life will carry on

Every week there's someone
Fighting with a friend
Who hates who this week?
Please let this drama end

Because I'll never understand
Why people have to judge
Adding insult to injury
To hearts that never budge

What you're probably feeling
Are typical teenage emotions
You'll switch feelings as fast
As the tides switch in oceans

I know that you're miserable
But aren't we all?
Who hasn't at some point
Taken a fall?

Don't say you hate your parents
Because I know you'll love them after
Don't blow it out of proportion
It's just another chapter

I don't need your drugs
I have a paper overdue
What's the point of writing
About some guy I never knew?

If you can't afford that dress
Get a job after school
Stop using him for money
Don't use her as a tool

Problems can be solved
So let's not overthink
Every bad conclusion
Or you'll be on the brink
Of always seeking attention
But you won't get it, you'll see
I'm just trying to live
A life that's drama-free
So do yourselves a favor
Avoid the fakes and liars
And anyone who savors
In causing you some drama
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I really like that this poem could be interpreted in a person's real life. The things said here are those of that we've probably heard around school at least once.

Also, the rhymes are amazing, and the flow of the words are so smooth, it forms a "song" because of the easy beat.

The first stanza was really clever, also.
Probably all of us could relate to this poem. (Oh the wonders of public school) Even the most ridiculous things people say, the sad thing is, sometimes people believe them.


Overall, well done! I wish I could rhyme like you. The impact was really nice. That was astonishing! :D
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This was a very well-written poem, and I feel like it covers the entirety of teenage/High-school drama very well. Heck - it even covers life before and after high school! I believe most people can relate to this poem, and in my opinion, relatable poems are always nice to read.

I myself try to avoid teenage drama, and to see these words expressed through the exasperated, fed up teenagers point of view makes everything much better, and I hope the people that do cause excessive drama in these chapters of life see this poem.

I also must say, I like your rhyme scheme you included on the poem. It made the poem appealing to read and even more appealing to just look at, and for that I thank you.

Overall, you did an outstanding job with the poem on life.
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~WordsbyMe May 2, 2013  New member
genius. well put
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:icongrnideladeee:
Wow, profound! Very good work.
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:iconstarartistannie:
This was awesomely written! And the who hates who this week- my school! Seriously, best poem I've ever read.
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~Lady-Bold Jan 18, 2013  Student General Artist
It was sweet and not overdrawn like a lot of poems are which is a great feeling
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~Always-A-Day-Dreamer Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so true!
People really can't judge other people or spread rumors, it always comes back to haunt you some way or another.
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=BleedTheDream180 Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
karma, i think its called
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~Always-A-Day-Dreamer Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, ok, if you want to say it the easy way...
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Mood: Wow! ~foxtail36 Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, this is amasing. nicely done.
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=BleedTheDream180 Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you xD
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~foxtail36 Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
np :3
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