"A Letter From The Trenches"
My Darling Dearest:
I miss you so very much
I have been thinking about you a lot lately
I hold your picture by my heart
During these tough times of being apart
The only thing I want more
Is to be with you at this very moment
To hold you and our kids
To feel safe in our own home
You were the last person I remember
Seeing as the ship left the shore
I hope you are the first person
Who comes into view if we return
I've been laying here in the trenches
Becoming more homesick with each day
Wishing for this war to end
So we can carry on our lives together
Lights are always flashing
But our memories help me get by
When I feel so alone
And cornered in a hole
I'm so lost right now
But I remember our promises
And want to continue living
There's so much more to do
Gunfire sounds are making me crazy
I miss your lips on mine
And when everything was normal
In the backyard in our pool
I want to return home to you
To see your smile once again
But things are not looking so good
On that subject at hand
It seems they may station me
Somewhere I really don't want to be
But this is the choice we made, right?
I have to follow through
But in the meantime
I hope you get this letter
And read it over as many times
As I have read yours
War ruins a lot of things for everyone
So I hope you understand
I can not promise you that I will survive
And if I don't, I want you to keep smiling, always
With Love,
Joseph Yates
i would love it i if you would critique this piece...... [link]
Very nice, a bit sappy for my taste, though.