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"A Letter From The Trenches"

My Darling Dearest:

I miss you so very much
I have been thinking about you a lot lately
I hold your picture by my heart
During these tough times of being apart

The only thing I want more
Is to be with you at this very moment
To hold you and our kids
To feel safe in our own home

You were the last person I remember
Seeing as the ship left the shore
I hope you are the first person
Who comes into view if we return

I've been laying here in the trenches
Becoming more homesick with each day
Wishing for this war to end
So we can carry on our lives together

Lights are always flashing
But our memories help me get by
When I feel so alone
And cornered in a hole

I'm so lost right now
But I remember our promises
And want to continue living
There's so much more to do

Gunfire sounds are making me crazy
I miss your lips on mine
And when everything was normal
In the backyard in our pool

I want to return home to you
To see your smile once again
But things are not looking so good
On that subject at hand

It seems they may station me
Somewhere I really don't want to be
But this is the choice we made, right?
I have to follow through

But in the meantime
I hope you get this letter
And read it over as many times
As I have read yours

War ruins a lot of things for everyone
So I hope you understand
I can not promise you that I will survive
And if I don't, I want you to keep smiling, always


With Love,

Joseph Yates
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Another poem I wrote. Something totally different from what I normally do
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~skruffy123 Aug 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
i liked that the author would be so honest and heart felt, while still caring so much about his beloved back home.
i would love it i if you would critique this piece...... [link]
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~yellowwindow6 Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sound like a real letter, i hate wars.
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Mood: Love ~princesssudi Aug 1, 2012  Professional Writer
Very amazing poem. Great for any person who is serving now and in the future. Great poem loved it.
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love it, so beautiful and emotional :heart:
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Mood: Joy ~Katrystolo Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can feel the longing he holds for his home and family...
Very nice, a bit sappy for my taste, though.
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~angel3433 Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh gosh its so sad yet beautiful
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~XenyaBromsson Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aww:aww: this reminds me of one of the last letters my grandpa wrote my grandma...its so beautiful, and you captured the emotion amazingly
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=BleedTheDream180 Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thats so sweet of him
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~XenyaBromsson Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, he was a great man:)
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*MistressofQuills Jul 29, 2012  Student Writer
i like it:)
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